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06/27/2013

Does the impact of music have on people good or bad?

Music found its way among people during the 1960’s and started exploding and expanding as years goes further. There is no doubt that everyone enjoys listening to music especially when recording music was a new movement that took everyone’s admirations. One would say that listening to music gives someone the enthusiasm of being in a better mood. However, music can be a double-edged weapon to the individual.

In fact, music was a major impact toward the society. Even though it was the era of mass protest during the 1960’s, it was the era of mass concerts as well. In addition, people all over the world listen to music without knowing the effects that are involved toward an individual’s psyche. Furthermore, music is attacking every society, which basically means that wherever there is technology, there is music turned up.

As a matter of fact, studies found that music has a great impact on human’s psyche. Music offers negative influences such as the fake emotions that control an individuals’ mood. That is why music can make someone feel passion, excited, sad, love, and hatred. Further more, all of these emotions are fake, which do not really exist and these emotions will vanish eventually. As a result of this, psychologists suggest not to listen to music since it would take someone real emotions and provide him the fake ones instead.

The negative effects that influence the listener to music that it strengthen the case of false emotion of its listener. Further more, it could either create to a listener’s psyche a condition that did not originally exist, which leads someone to be in love with a person who was not before hearing the song in love with him. Music increases the amount of love twice reality. Additionally, if someone’s emotions will not be as an assistant for his thoughts, it requires to be canceled. When the exam comes the person and receives life dilemmas, which make things at stake, this deceptive mirage reveals and shows things for what they really are. This false love which been created because of listening to music turns to a divorce and destroys the lives of the two couples. As a result of that, Music is like a drug that gives illusory happiness to the person who is used listening to music, but in fact music preys him.