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English
25/FEB/2013
Foreigners and Challenges
Interesting moments comes to one’s thought, capturing distinctive events to
one’s mind so that he could remember them later on. The brain could draw Many
kinds of images. For example, the mind draws beautiful and colorful images or
dark and blind ones. The most difficult moments are the unforgettable ones.
Difficulties that teaches us knowledge and gives us more courage and
experience. There are many kinds of difficulties that a foreigner might face such
as waiting at the bus station for many hours, feeling unsecured, being lonely
most of your life time, washing your clothes and making an accident while
driving. Everybody have to have problems during their life. Once a new event in
life approaches us, the first time we might fail as well to the second time.
Failures should not give up so quickly. However, they should try many times till
they succeed. Being defeated is the first step that follows success. Since it is the
first time, we will not know how to deal with difficulties unless we try it more than
once. Till we become successful. The only way to defeat and overcome those
difficulties is to never give up; moreover, to think wisely and to be smart as it
called intelligence. A foreigner should confront difficulties and hard moments
especially when travelling abroad without knowledge and experience such as
choosing friends, organizing priorities, being reliable. However, to overcome
those difficulties is never giving up.
Changes occur in everyone’s life, and the more people grow the more
changes happen. Even though a big change happened and new challenges
came across in my life, it improved many skills and taught me more about life. My
father had always told me that the more you live, the more you know. It means
that the more you get experienced, the more you acknowledge yourself. While
being in the United States in my first fresh men year, I learned that friends are
the most beautiful thing in life. After tasting the bitterness of loneliness and being
alone the most of my life time, which were about to drag me to what it is called
insanity. Further more, I decided to make friends, which was a big challenge
to me. There are many kinds of friends, according to the environment they have
been living in and the way they have been treated among their lives. There were
really good friends that you would like to spend all your time with. This is an
example of a bright angel leads you to the right way. On the other hand, there
are a bit of friends that give you an image of a dark demon that reflects on their
behaviors and acts. For instance, I had a friend who was going to lead me to the
wrong path and destroy me by putting wrong ideas into my head and trying to
convince me to stop studying and work in the wrong side of business, which is
illegal .
After spending a long time as a foreigner cast away from my country. I have
learned substantial things that helped me to inspire a way to live as a king, which
was priority. There should be priorities in your life in order to organize your time
and to be a king and a master of your life. For example, think about why you are
travelling overseas and leaving all your family and your lovers behind. There
should be a purpose to motivate us and push us from behind that usually lets us
climb the highest walls with the highest achievement. Being reliable is very
essential so that you can make your own plans to be successful.
As I have lived abroad I knew that I should not count on anybody.
Your plan should be plan A and it is the primary plan. Other plans should be
secondary since other people would not give you the importance as the
importance they give to their selves. For instance, if you are alone and there is
nobody to pick you up from the place you’re at, call as many friends as you can
because not all of them will come for you. Even make a plan A for you so if they
all did not come for you, which is call a cap or something like that.
Finally, I would talk about how to overcome all of these problems in each
circumstance. Usually, they all have the same solution, which is never to give up
and eternally to surrender and not in the least to despair. However, it requires a
good will as well to a good desire to achieve their goals and wishes. Everybody
rode in the same boat. I have spent one year riding buses and sometimes waiting
for them that takes hours rather than buying a car. That made me depend on my
self. And after that my father bought for me a brand new car. Therefore, Big
things start from small things. We only have to wait for the big things to arrive so
that we could only draw a big smile on our faces, which is a sign of success.
To conclude, beautiful images come to our minds as well to the dark images
which reflect to the difficulties. While being abroad you will face many kinds of
difficulties which include new events, bright friends and dark friends and finally
how to be reliable and how to depend on our selves. Patience is one of the
important things that lead us to succeed and helps us to defeat all the rough
circumstances.