Revise a persuasive essay.

Wenlan luo

Date 28/8/2013

En101 professor Copeland

Persuasive essay 1

Facebook is great?

Facebook is a largest social networking site in the world and upload eight million five hundred thousand photo every day and has about 9 million users. The main founder is mark Zuckerberg who is the graduate at Harvard University. Facebook bring a lots of benefits for human and also change our lifestyle.Facebook helps people can touch their friends easily than before, and also you can create a personal profile, upload pictures and share it with you friends. In addition, there are many company use Facebook for their advertisement. Moreover, Facebook also is a newspaper. However, the topic for this essay is with a question mark. In the last semester, my economy professor told us when you met a question mark, you can always say it depends. Therefore, Facebook also harm to society, because it do not have strong system to protect personal privacy.

On the positive side, Firstly, Facebook is the most convenience way to share the information with you friends. You can stay in your home and just get online, and click on the Facebook, and then you can connect to you friends pass the Facebook. You can share you picture and write a status, and also you can see you friend’s pictures. If you like you friends pictures you can click on like, or you can comments on that picture, not only for the picture also for the status. Because of the Facebook, if we have friends far away from us, we still can touch and keep connect them on the Facebook.

Secondly, Facebook give many company an opportunity to promote their products and company. When you post your company information, products, and company states on the Facebook, and then your customer may write review or feedback on you Facebook page. If you always get positive feedback, your company must will attract many new customer from the Facebook, because Facebook have about 9 million user.

Thirdly, Facebook also is a newspaper, because there will many user post news and new states on the Facebook, and people will share it. Reading news on the Facebook is much fun than read news on the newspaper, because when you read news on the Facebook, you also can see your friends and other users’ comments for this news. It can helps people understand the news better than just read it through the newspaper. In addition, it also can a children to read news through the Facebook, and it can help children expand their mind in a fun way.

On the other hand, Facebook is an unsafe system to the society, because people get other people’s personal information easily. There some people who always stolen others accounts, and use it on the illegality way. Additionally, when you post your personal information and photos on the Facebook, you already lose your privacy. Even the photograph set as only show to the specific people to watch, but you cannot stop your friends reproduced. Therefore, there is no privacy on Facebook.

In conclusion, whether Facebook is good or bad. It is depend on who we use it, and what we use it for. If we can use it correctly and safely. It will help our life better and convenience. If we use it on the illegality way, police will find you out, and you will get a fair judgment from the court.