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Omar Alayoub

Professor Klepper

English 113A

                                                    Family Guy

Nowadays almost every one can’t stop watching T.V. This generation can’t live without T.V, and it plays a big role in our society. T.V shows us the news of the world in two ways, serious and derisory. For example of the derisory ” Family Guy “. It’s a cartoon T.V acts about the problems that faces the American families. Although, its one of the most popular T.V series in the U.S., a lot of people attacked it, and it was stopped twice because of the audacious episodes, but it also came back twice. ” Family Guy ” shows to the world that the US culture is decadent, and the American citizen are lazy and stupid, but they are not. In my opinion I think it’s not useful for children’s. There are many impolite jokes, violence, and sexual jokes and activities. 

First, The impolite jokes have a negative impact on children. When the children’s learn how to speak rude and impolite that is a big problem, and the ” Family Guy ” show famous in impolite jokes. In these days children have changed than before. Before the kids do not dare, or can say obscene words, opposite these days. There are many reasons that changed the children’s manners, and a great example is ” Family Guy “. Children have their own time period to learn about certain things. Sigmund Freud can help understand the concepts behind this. The show is a cartoon, and the cartoons only for the children’s. If the children’s learn those things, that is really trouble for them and our society. In these days I surprised from the words of children, there are many rude things that they said. LaChrystal D Ricke says, “ The language on Fox’s Family Guy has been the subject of criticism, foundation reports, and even lawsuits. The show’s creators assert that the language used in the show simply provides satirical social commentary; others believe the language is inappropriate for broadcast television. This study investigated the presence of derogatory language in Family Guy in order to make an argument regarding the potential cultivating effects of such language when presented in an animated format. The study found that derogatory messages were present in roughly 9% of Family Guy scenes and that correlations existed between the types of characters that were the senders and recipients of derogatory messages and the types of messages transmitted. ’’ I agree with him that is inappropriate for broadcast television, because it have a many satirical social commentary.

Second, I think violence can wait for a child because children between the ages of 5 to 13 are very honest people. They might don’t like someone and they can treat them bad once learning about violence, and the innocent school mate will be likely bullied by these children. Children should not be introduced to violence in their heads they can enjoy it and think its okay and thereby committing something later in the future. Bonnie A Lazar says ” Despite an abundance of research demonstrating an association between heavy viewing of TV violence & aggressive behavior, regulatory policy has failed to decrease violence on children’s TV. Here, research & theory that explain why children exposed to high rates of television violence may be at greater risk of developing school & social problems is reviewed. It is recommended that this should be a major concern for social work. ” I agree with him, and I think ” Family Guy ” helping our children to learn more about violence and how they engage in violence. There are many episodes that’s about violence and that is wrong, the episodes must to be purposeful. If human learn something from childhood he will never forget it when he grow up. This is more of the reasons why some people get sick psychologically. Yes there are many violence activates in our life, but we can explain to them why these things occurred. Studies by George Gerbner, Ph.D., at the University of Pennsylvania, have shown that children’s TV shows contain about 20 violent acts each hour and also that children who watch a lot of television are more likely to think that the world is a mean and dangerous place.

Finally, For the sexual activities they can wait because they didn’t understand what is going on or what they are talking about, you don’t want to put a child in that responsibility of making his own child to have a lot of time to thinking about that. Children’s will learn the sexual activities when they grow up by schools and parents, but the ” Family Guy ” there is allot of sexual activities that’s makes them learn it when they are child.

In short, The ” Family Guy ” must to stop those impolite jokes, violence, and the sexual activities. Because it had a very bad affects on the US citizen not only the children’s. Before I came to US I was thinking that the American are lazy and racism, but they are not, they are better than that things. If this show didn’t stopped we will face a big problem with the children’s.

                                                  Works Cited

– Ricke, LaChrystal D. “Funny or Harmful?: Derogatory Speech on Fox’s Family Guy.” Communication Studies, 63.2 (2012): 119-134.

–  Lazar, Bonnie A. “Why Social Work Should Care: Television Violence and Children.” Child & Adolescent Social Work Journal, 11.1 (1994): 3-19.