This is a 1000 word essay, APA style. attached is the format to how it should be completed.
this came from thesis and outline which is attached
Great start! My only concern would be that you are trying to cover too much– restricting your thesis would allow you to be less overwhelmed and actually more effective…in addition, you want have up to date sources- I see 1972 and 1993…to be most effective have something in last decade.
Thanks so much for your hard work,
JP
ENGL101
Essay 2: Causal Analysis Argument about the Media
Instructions
In Module/Week 5, you will write an appro
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imately 1000-word (3–4-page) causal analysis essay in response to one of the following prompts:
· Select an image(s) from an electronic source that exemplifies your position on the effect of television in American culture. Your argument should try to show that a cause-and-effect relationship does or does not exist between TV and behavior, or health, intelligence, morality, etc.
· Select an image(s) from an electronic source that you think exemplifies your position on the effect of advertising on American youth. What do advertisements tell young people they should value? Argue a causal relationship between American advertising and the attitudes and behaviors of American youth.
Please be sure to follow the Writing Processes guidelines: gather all of your information, plan the direction of your essay, and organize your ideas by developing a 1-page thesis statement and outline for your essay. Format the thesis statement and the outline in a single Word document using current MLA, APA, or Turabian style (whichever corresponds to your degree program). Submit this thesis and outline by 11:59 p.m. (ET) on Monday of Module/Week 4 for instructor feedback.
As you compose your essay, be sure to:
· Follow the writing style required by your degree program (MLA, APA, or Turabian).
· Use in-text citations to cite works.
· Integrate at least 4 quotes, 1 summary, and 1 paraphrase into your essay.
· Include a References or Works Cited page containing any and all sources you cite in your paper, including images. You may use 1 or 2 images in your essay to support your argument, but each must not take up more than 1/3 of a page (with 1″ margins), and they will not count in the total page count for the assignment.
· Use the Grading Rubric, Outline Suggestions, and Proofreading Checklist (provided below) to draft and revise your essay.
· Include your thesis statement and outline on a separate page at the end of the document.
· Type your degree program and which style of writing you are using (MLA, APA, or Turabian) in the “Submission Title” field of the SafeAssign link in the module so that your instructor can grade your essay accordingly.
Be sure to cite fully all quotations, summaries, paraphrases, and images. If you fail to give credit for outside material, it will be regarded as plagiarism and will result in a “0” on your essay and possibly course failure.
Please Note: This assignment must be submitted by 11:59 p.m. (ET) on Monday of Module/Week 5 and must include a title page, essay itself, a works cited/references page of any primary or secondary texts cited in the essay, followed by the thesis/outline page.
Proofreading Checklist
Part 1:
Read through your paper and check the appropriate boxes on the chart below. If any area of your paper needs revision, make sure you correct it before submitting your essay. One of the best ways to proofread your writing is to read it backward to forward, sentence-by-sentence. This helps you to see words and ideas you may have missed. Another very successful tool for proofreading is to read your work out loud to someone else. Students often think that handing their paper to someone and asking them to read it is the same thing, but it isn’t. Instead, ask them to listen while you read your own words. You will immediately hear what you missed or want to improve in your writing.
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Part 2:
When you are satisfied with the quality of your essay, post it to Blackboard via the SafeAssign link for grading. Do not forget to write your degree program and whether you are using MLA, APA, or Turabian in the “Submission Title” field when submitting your paper.
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ENGL 101
Appeals Analysis
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Word/Phrase
Type of Appeal
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“decent respect”
ethos
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“repeatedly”
logos
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“refused”
ethos
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“utterly”
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“formidable to tyrants only”
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“places unusual and uncomfortable”
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“obstructing the Laws”
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“refusing”
Running Head: EFFECT OF TELEVISION ON AMERICAN CULTURE
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EFFECT OF TELEVISION ON AMERICAN CULTURE
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Effect of Television on American Culture
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Essay outline
Introduction
Thesis statement
Effects of TV on American culture
Behavioral changes brought by TV viewing
Effects of TV on health
Effects of TV on moral development
Behavioral changes brought by advertisements
Impacts of advertisements on American culture
Introduction
Television viewing has both positive and negative effects on the viewers and the largest number of victims is the young people. Developed nations face the greatest challenge in controlling the effects of culture erosion brought by media and television viewing. American children are exposed to television right from their tender age and this brings a great effect on the mental development of the child. Advertisements have also been found to impact the behavioral development of children especially those exposed to television viewing in tender ages. Negative behaviors like violence and drug abuse have been attributed to advertisements which promote such behaviors among the youth.
Thesis statement
Television viewing has great effects on the American culture especially the youth who spend most of their time glued to the television sets. Some of the advertisements promote evil deeds like violence among the youth and this disrupts peace in the society. Some of the scenes on television are violent and this may make the children aggressive specially the boys. Children try to imitate what they see on television and this may trigger violence and negative competition for dominance (Bogart, 1972). This affects the way of life of the people which touches on the culture of the American people.
People will always try to copy what they view on television and this triggers unhealthy competition especially among the youth. Young people even engage in unhealthy practices in order to get to the levels they want. Some of the advertisements on television are very enticing driving people to do some things that may harm their health. A young person may want to imitate a movie actor by overworking his body to match that of a movie star (Kline, 1993). This is sometimes unhealthy and may end up in body complications thereby harming the young person.
Most pre-school kids do not comprehend the distinction between a program developed to amuse and a commercial developed to sell. A number of studies have recorded that kids under the age of eight years are developmentally incapable to comprehend the distinction between advertising and regular development. A substantial number of kids begin viewing television at an earlier age and in larger amounts than what experts recommend. Evidence suggests that television’s impact on kids and adolescents is related to how plenty of your energy and effort they spend viewing television (Bogart, 2005).
In conclusion, the effect of the media on the psychosocial growth of kids is highly effective. The media have a great effect on culture and the lives of people especially in the developed nations. The objectives of this announcement are to find the valuable and adverse reactions of media on a child’s psychological and health, and to identify how physicians can guidance patients and their loved ones and improve the healthy use of the media in their places.
References
Bogart, L. (2005). Over the Edge: How the Pursuit of Youth by Marketers and the Media has Changed American Culture. Chicago: Ivan R. Dee.
Bogart, L. (1972). The Age of Television; a Study of Viewing Habits and the Impact of Television on American Life. New York: F. Ungar Pub. Co.
Kline, S. (1993). Out of the Garden: Toys, TV, and Children’s Culture in the Age of Marketing. London: Verso.