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I have 3 essays that need editing.
The prompts in order (from the first to the third)
The furst one:
Write an essay that takes a stand on a specific human rights issue that affects women somewhere in the world and support your position through the use of credible evidence (such as quotes, statistics, examples, and /or anecdotes). Your goal is to argue why a certain problem is a problem and propose possible solutions for that problem using credible outside resources as support. Make sure that you adequately narrow your topic.
Your paper should be approximately 4-5 pages, typed, double-spaced, in 12-point font, minimum of three credible sources, and in MLA format.
The second prompt:
Write an essay that explores the concept of home, in particular the ideologies, attitudes and values attached to a specific home space.
Your paper should be approximately 4-5 pages, typed, double-spaced, in 12-point font, minimum of three credible sources, and in MLA format.
The thrid one:
Write an essay that explores the concept of home, in particular the ideologies, attitudes and values attached to a specific home space. Your paper should be approximately 4-5 pages, typed, double-spaced, in 12-point font, minimum of three credible sources, and in MLA format.
*Attached are the essays in order.
Sex Trafficking in Thailand
Sex trafficking is a form of slavery and involuntary servitude resulting in grave human rights violations. Women rights are not being respected as the should be . In Thailand and huge number of women are sex trafficked because the people who transport them and lied then when they arrive they force to do what ever the sex trafficker tells them to do. In the article “United States/ Thailand: U.S puts on human/sex trafficking watch list” the authors talk about the situation in Thailand. They talk about the victims who are been sex trafficked and number of victims is going up every year and that should be stopped. According to United States/Thailand: U.S. puts Thailand on human trafficking watch list The statistics that show the increase are ” The report estimated that 12.3 millions people were victims of trafficking between 2009-2010 , although it said there has been progress over the past decade”. I totally agree with author about this issue because if we don’t stop this problem the girls will be in danger in the future. The way that the sex trafficker so tricky . So, the women right should be protected very well. The government should stand up to protect women and their rights
Sex trafficking is happening in the Thailand more than truly know, Peter Janssen states ” Thailand which has about 2 million registered migrant workers and estimated 1 million unregistered ones, has long been hub for trafficking for the sex industry and forced labour”. There is 300 victims every year and 40% of them are underage and young girls. There lack of education and poverty. In Thailand some women sell themselves for sex for their own benefits, but countless others are made to be slaves for the benefit of the “pimp” by threats, fraud, abuse, coercion, and many other reasons. Sex trafficking victims can be men or women, child or adult, male or female, foreign or Citizen. Most often the victims are females between the ages of five and twenty-five with the average age range being twelve to fourteen so they can be in a good age for sex. Victims can be random or targeted; either way a pimp will force young girls to become sex traffickers. For example a young girl, from a nice family, gets a call from a friend that wants her to meet her outside her house to talk. The girl comes outside and her friend stuffs her into a car with two men who sexually assault her. The pimps aim to achieve complete control over someone by using physical, emotional, and mental means. Seasoning often involves beating, whipping, burning, gang rape, confinement, threats, mind control, renaming, confiscation of documents, and forced sexual education by forcing the victim to view pornography to teach them how to have sex. So all of these ways are very popular and the police should know how to handle this problems. And if the police find some girls and rescue them the give them help and then they send them back to there families . There should be a big punishment for the sex trafficking crime in every county not only Thailand.
The money is another problem. For example, on how much a Sex trafficker makes in a year estimates that if one girl was forced to meet quotas of $500 per night, seven days a week and gave all of her money to her sex trafficker, and the pimp had three other victims in which he was gaining money from he would make an estimate yearly salary of $632,000. In this case we can make some plans so we can force the sex trafficker to change the business, for example we can increase the prices of the bodyguards and also we can increase the rent and let the brothels owners pay tax more the other. After this solution the owners will not have that much benefits so they will change the business. So the governments and police need to work hard to finish this problem because if they keep it in this way the number will go up instead of going down.
Women rights have hurt badly in Thailand by taking every precious thing from her. The sex traffickers took the women virginity to enjoy them selves by receiving money and benefits from these poor girls and women. The sex traffickers always treat the women as an object and they sell her and then when she come back the resell her again. Some girls are been sex trafficker since the are so young and sex trafficker will get more money when they sell a virgin one so they are focusing on the young girls who still virgin often. This not fair because the girls lost there virginity because of a bad guy who trying to earn easy money. That will effect badly on the women because she can’t get married because she did sex with a lot of people so who will marry her so she lost her life. So we need to work hard to stop this problem and get back the women normal life and give the poor people who are been trafficked new life with happiness.
Sex trafficking is moving widely. Its I great idea if we start educating our girls, sister and mothers. Starting a group made by teachers, police and parents to teach the young girls and let them even they are so young maybe someday they would be targeted and what should they if they get targeted. After the education it’s will be hard to trick a girl to get in the business. The education will help a lot in stopping the sex trafficking.
Sex trafficking will lead to get more diseases because you do not know who has the disease and its so easy to transfer from person to another person by sex so this is another big problem. So when women get a disease from someone and then she didn’t know that she had it and then she continued to do sex for a month because she’s forced to do it of course, imagine how many people will get the disease!!. For sure I will be unbelievable number and this will lead to another huge problem. So we should help the women and protect them from being sex slave for a bad people. Men pick up women off the streets and then bring them back to never be seen again. Men can go to brothels, massaging parlors, or the pimp’s house to involuntarily have girls sell themselves for sex. The buyers don’t have to fill paperwork of sign a contract. The pimp doesn’t care who it is as long as they get their money, but in the hand the women don’t have any choice. Why is that why the women can get the same rights as man! We should change that and make the rights equal.
Sex trafficking is a serious issue and should be more important and known in the world because a lot of people living a nightmare of this problem and its really bad reality for them. So the government and police should be more serious about this problem because maybe someday our child will be in a sex trafficker like them. We should educate our families and friend and the people around the world that sex trafficking is a crime and it should not be exist. We can unit and cooperate to make a step by step and with time we can defeat the sex trafficking problem So before we get any damage lets start to finish this problem and make the world without any danger and living in peace.
Work Cited
Janssen, Peter. “UN Envoy: Thailand Fails to Enforce Laws Against Human
Trafficking.”McClatchy – Tribune Business NewsAug 19 2011. ABI/INFORM
Complete; Los Angeles Times; ProQuest Newsstand. Web. 6 Feb. 2013.
Ricker, NokNoi. “Husson Event Draws Attention to Horrors of Human Trafficking, Sex
Slavery.” Bangor Daily NewsOct 20 2012. Los Angeles Times; ProQuest Newsstand.
Web. 6 Feb. 2013 .
“United States/Thailand: U.S. Puts Thailand on Human Trafficking Watch List.” Asia News
MonitorJun 16 2010. ABI/INFORM Complete; Los Angeles Times; ProQuest
Newsstand. Web. 6 Feb. 2013 .
Multigenerational houses
Home is a place that has our memories and emotions. Home is where every one should feel relaxed and happy while watching the family gathering and chatting to each other. The home definition is different from one to another. Some people consider the sports is there home and family. Another people consider their friend is there family. The houses and the people changed and nowadays the house become smaller and smaller every year. The houses become single family house more than multigenerational houses. According to U.S. Census Bureau, 2011 American Community Survey the total households in the US is 114,991,725. The singles family houses are 110,652,830 and on the other side the multigenerational houses are 4,338,895 house only in the US. There is only 4,338,895 multigenerational houses in United states because the culture is used to live in single family houses. On the other side there is few percentage of single family houses in Kuwait and there is high percentage of multigenerational houses because the culture and the people in Kuwait believe that multigenerational houses is better for families .Although the single family houses are more than the multigenerational house and the multigenerational houses is more louder and overcrowded , the multigenerational house is better because its more beneficial economically to live multigenerational house and it creates a stronger family bond.
In Kuwait, there is no single house family at all and all homes are designed to be multigenerational houses its kind of culture belief that is better for the family. According to Beta Phrase Base ” population in poverty: 0.00″. So this statistic shows that multigenerational houses has a big affect on the poverty side and if we had more multigenerational house in the US , the number of the homeless while goes down so fast and the poverty will be gone. So the people in the US should start to build more generational house for there benefits and new generations benefits as well.
The multigenerational houses have specific thing that makes it better than the single houses which is the economic part. When we want to discuss the cost of living in both type of houses we will see that the multi generation houses make the whole family pay less than the single houses. There will be less care about the cost for the families who live in the multigenerational houses so that there will be more comfort and relax in these families.
Not only does the multigenerational house help the family, it also can help the country economically in many sides. For example, its will save land space for the country so they can use it for their needs. Also, Its can raise the price of the houses because the size of the house for the big families and it will be beneficial for both sides because the family will buy the house price together and other side will get a good price for the house which is a great deal and helping both side economically. While the multigenerational houses are more beneficial economically, Americans do not like it.
Lots of people think that more people in the house make the house overcrowded and there will be no space for them, but it is a wrong idea. More people in the house makes the house more creative and successful. More people means more participating in the house works so that the works will be done on time; on the other hands, single houses will be struggling with the big amount of works because there will be lack of workers.
Children will feel more safer with more people in the house where they cannot find it in single houses. Children can be happy to play in a house that has lots of individuals so that they can feel free to have fun and enjoy their times.
The multigenerational houses make children learn faster and more than the single houses. The multigenerational house can be a good source for knowledge and experience. You can learn from the other in the house how to manage your work and the chance of getting the answer would be high. Either you will ask questions or you will listen you will get more information about life from people in the house. The breeding in the multigenerational house will make the person be more responsible because every one in the family has a task to do for the home. For example I lived in a multigenerational house so a learned a lot of thing. I used to care of my family and see their needs ,also we used to help each other in every thing and we couldn’t do our task we ask for help so we rely on each other in house and this advantage you will never find it in a single family home houses.
Every males learn and get experience from his childhood and the main place that he/she get a lot of knowledge is home. If they born and raised in single family home he will not get that much of knowledge from his parents because they will be working all the time so he will be lonely and there is not body to help him. On the other side when the person born and raised in multigenerational house they will be so responsible because usually if he is a male the family will depend on him so he will take care of the whole family and he will help as much as can to provide the family needs. So the multigenerational house make the man responsible on the family which is good for him in the future when he get his own family
The multigenerational houses help the members to earn money and saving it as much as possible. If the does not live with his parents he will live in apartment so that will cost a lot of money and he will make his own way in the life but he will waste a lot in something that he can save if he lived with his parents. For example if the person live with his parents he will share every thing in the house starting with electricity till the foods. He will save a lot of money for his self and that will make him move out from the home and get his own home faster than the person who lives alone.
The multigenerational house has the greatest gathering between the family. When you live in single family house, you will be living only with babysitter all the time because the parents will be busy in working and earning money to cover the family needs and living their child behind. Also, they will get along well with the other family member for example their sister’s or brother’s family ,so the family bond will be so weak and that wrong because in future the cousins will not know each other very well. On the hand the mutigenerational houses the person will live between his whole family for example if his parents at work he will sitting with his grandparents and they will take care of him and they will teach him and give him help and see what he needs until he be responsible and old enough to take care of them back. So that makes the family so strong and that will make the family bond last longer and stronger.
In conclusion,. the house should be more multigenerational house than single family houses because it will make the family band stronger and it will gives more knowledge for the new members in the family and they will have more people talk with and more sociable. Also, it will reduce the number of the poverty and homeless. The multigenerational houses make the man better and more responsible on his family and future family. The multigenerational is more safety for the child because when parents are out the grandparents will take care of him because the in the multigenerational house the members rely on each other . The multigenerational houses will make the society more stable and stronger because if it happens the poverty will not be exist anymore.
Work Cited
Rico, Gabriela. “Forecast:Housing Prices to Increase.” McClatchy – Tribune Business NewsProQuest. Jan 12 2013. Web. 13 Mar. 2013
Nancy, Bean F. “The Benefits of Multigenerational Housing.” The Union LeaderProQuest. Nov 04 2011. Web. 13 Mar. 2013
“More Families Live with Multiple Generations.” Miami Times: 1. ProQuest. 2010. Web. 13 Mar. 2013
Arranged marriages versus love marriage
Marriages are viewed differently around the world. Because of the different cultures and traditions and two of these marriages are arranged marriages and love marriage. The marriage can happened in different ways because of different culture and different beliefs. For instance, love marriages which are very popular in the U.S which is come after meeting in school or college and after that dating until they feel this right person they get married. Love marriage is kind of culture in the one of the biggest country the U.S as I can see in my experience. On the other side arranged marriage which happened usually in the east side specially in India. Arranged marriage is arranged by the both husband and wife families and they choose the other partner for their child after looking in the partner background and reputation. In the article called “Reva Seth speaks up for arranged marriages” Arthur Pais says that western people misunderstanding the arranged marriage. Pais claims talks about a Indian girl who get married to a man who she just saw him seven times and she said that she really happy in her life after she get married because of the arranged marriage. Although many Americans believe that love marriage is better than arranged marriages, in reality arranged marriages are better because they last longer because the person has the same life style and its save time for the people to study and work instead of wasting time in dating.
Love marriages takes long to find the right partner because as we know is not always the first person you find is your life partner it rarely happens. This will not make the person focus in his/her life perfectly because he needs to spend time finding his life partner and It’s really take long time as you see most American get married in their late twenties. So that time he waste in finding his spouse can be used for his education because its gives him more time to study and work instead going outside and finding a girl that might be his life partner. In addition, the meeting is really stressful so that will make the person concentration will be so poor so that will is really affect negatively in the person life and plans. On the other hand the arranged marriages are really better then love marriage. The arranged marriages are arranged by family so that will save time for the person in his life. Also, it will keep him away for wasting time in dating so that will help him in his studying and he/she can do well in the life without thinking about wasting time at finding their life partner because their family will handle it.
Not only saving time on finding their spouse, It also help them economically in their lives. For example, When you want to date a girl first you will invite her for dinner and you will pay to give a manner. Also, when you go with your girlfriend or boyfriend you will spend too much money together to have fun without caring about their money. Also, will spend time in gasoline because you will meet you partner usually everyday that a lots of money. In addition, when you be with your partner will be stressful of meeting so you will do badly in your class and might get bad grades or sometimes failing so that will cost more money. On The other hand, in the arranged marriage they don’t waste a lot of money on meeting people because their family do everything. The child who will be arranged married will save money more then the one who will do the love marriage and the child who is arranged married will be relaxed then the loved marriage person.
Love marriage is the known marriage in the western side for long ages. But the arranged marriages last longer then the love marriages. Love marriage happens for the person him/herself so the of that they find the right person is 50%-50% and they get married after they feel that they fallen in love without caring about the financial part. After they get married they start to complain about money it happens often in love marriage and after they have a child the problems come one by one because they will start fighting because of financial part in the marriage the reason is the young love that let them get married with caring about the future. On the other side, the arranged marriages involve money people in the marriage from both families. For example, the family will start to ask about the other family background and their reputation and also will see the both persons degree so they can insure their child future and they find the right match for their child so they can live happy together. So that makes the arranged marriages more garneted because both family ask about each other to find the right person.
Every country has own belief and traditions. Arranged marriages are happened for long time in the Indian and the Muslims culture. So the people in this culture do the same as their parents did because they believe in the traditions. If the person wants to do what their parents do they can do it. Also, if they do not want to be arranged marriage it is up to them they will not be forced to do it. In India usually people do the arranged marriage because is more stable for them and that divorce rate is too low because the partners are fit for each other and happy. On the other side, in the U.S tradition’s they believe that love marriage is the part of their culture. As it seen the majority of American people get married after they meet each other for long time. They usually find their partner by themselves and if they fall in love they get married. Also, if they want to be arranged marriage they can do it. But he problem in the love marriage that when they fall in love and get married they do not think about the future and check each other background which is kind of wrong because their problem made the high rate of love marriage in the U.S . So the traditions belief can effect positively or negatively on the marriages and traditions of arranged marriages are much better and stable then love marriage
In conclusion, the marriage is not only feeling that matched between the partner and not only love that get the along each other. The marriage is to find the other partner by asking about family background and reputation which is arranged marriage. So the arranged marriage is better then love marriage because save time which helps the person to get good grades in his college instead of wasting time on find life partner. Also, it saves money because you will be spending money in dating and going outside with girls. In addition the arranged marriages is more garneted more then love marriages because there is money people involved in the marriages and ask well and did great job to find the right and matched partner.
Annotated Bibliography
Arthur, J. P. “Reva Seth Speaks Up for Arranged Marriages.” India Abroad: 2. Jul 04 2008. ProQuest. Web. 3 Apr. 20. talks about the arranged marriages and the American media misunderstanding. She says that American thinks that the people who had arranged marriage met for the first time in wedding and that’s totally wrong , she says. She want to show the American people that arranged marriages last longer than the “Love marriages”..
Fish, Stanley. “Marrying Out of the Faith.” The NewYork Times [NewYork] 16 April 2013. . Web. Talks about love marriage and how people get married and they have different religion and believe. Fish said that the interfaith marriage in the beginning look easy but after the get married and having a child here where the problem start to comes. Showing other problems too.
Hickley, Matthew. “Blunkett Backlash on Arranged Marriages.” Daily Mail: 15. Feb 08 2002. ProQuest. Web. 3 Apr. 2013. talks about the situation in Britain about arranged marriages. Also it talks about how many people are getting married in arranged marriages in British . also talks about the opinion about the arranged marriages at the past in British and how its changed now . providing some statistics and seeing that the arranged marriages are more stable and longer.
