Competing Siblings

I would like to add dialogue that shows interaction between the brothers and how competitive the two were. Also, a deep and descriptive moment where that shows pain that the main character felt. Don’t just say he felt a certain way describe the moment fully.The story is a story that I purchased on write my papers and just need more added to it to make it interesting…BrothersRonald White was the son of Mr. and Mrs. White and the sole beneficiary of the family’sbusiness. After finishing his undergraduate degree he joined his father’s company as the humanresources manager. He was able to enhance the company’s production, something that made hisfather very proud of him and he was assured that the business was going to be left in excellenthands after his passing. After five years of working for his father Ronald decided to get marriedand the couple was blessed with two sons named Reagan and Ryan White. One fall Mr. Whitepast on and the business was left to his son Ronald White to run it.The company continued to perform very well. Because of this, Ronald was able to givehis family the best. His sons Ryan and Reagan had very different personalities. Ryan was ahumble, critical and reserved person whereas Reagan was more of an outgoing person witha short temper that paid little attention to details. Ryan would perform excellently in schoolwhereas Reagan would perform fairly. This made Reagan repeat the same class and they werenow in the same class. Occasionally Reagan would drag Ryan into fights in school so that theirparents would not view him as the golden child and when they were caught, Reagan wouldalso tattle tell on his brother. These personalities became more intense when the two went tocollege. Ryan worked hard and his performance was impressive. However, Reagan barelymade it to next academic year. Ryan would give advice to his brother about the importance ofeducation but Reagan would dismiss him because he was the older brother.Ryan’s success in education made his brother jealous of him. When both brothers weredone with their undergraduate degree their father offered them an opportunity to work in thecompany. Reagan accepted the offer. Unlike Reagan, Ryan wanted to continue with his studiesand get a Masters in Economics and Finance.Mr. Ronald White respected his son’s wishes and gave the Human Resource departmentto Reagan to manage it and sent Ryan to Britain for his postgraduate studies. After one year,Ryan was done with his studies and came back home to join his father and brother in thebusiness. When he made it home he found things to be very different from the way he had leftthem. Despite the fact that the company was making substantial profits, many of the employeeshad been laid-off and their production lines decreased. Also, he found that his father had fallenill and most of the company’s profits were used for his treatment. Ryan expressed his interest intaking his father’s position as the director of the business while his receiving medical treatment.This did not sit well with his brother because Reagan thought he would be the sole inheritorof the business because he’s the one that stayed around and helped with the business when hisbrother decided to leave to further his studies. Their father was left to make a tough decisionbetween letting Reagan- the faithful son who chose to remain behind and work in the companyto manage the company solely or with his brother who had the skills and knowledge to ensure itscontinued survival. This hard decision made his health take a negative spin and caused him to bereadmitted into the hospital. Ryan asked the doctor in charge to carry out a full body examinationto determine the cause of the pain in his father’s lower back.After a series of tests it was confirmed that Ronald had a tumor in the lower part of hisbackbone and operation was not possible because the tumor had migratory cancer cells. Thedoctor stated that the cancer cells had spread and that he was in the final stages. There was littlethe doctors could do apart from just managing the pain. The news shocked everyone in thefamily and they decided to seek the diagnosis of a second doctor. Unfortunately the results anddoctor’s advice were the same and to make the situation worse time and money had been spent.Ronald knew he had to make a decision soon before he was incapacitated.Finally, he made the decision to give his position to Ryan because he was in a betterplace to lead the company. This decision built a wedge between the two brothers. Reagan wantedto see his brother fail so that he could change their father’s mind. At work, Reagan tried hisbest to sabotage his brother. He tried to create negative relationship between the institutionsthat bought their products by using his old gang ties to threaten personnel in the institutions andspread rumors about the company and its products. The business suffered a massive blow whentwo of its major customers decided not to renew their contracts because of treats and allegationsthat were being spread. However, Ryan was able to overcome this by attracting other institutionssuch as construction companies who wanted customized safety shoes for their employees. Thesenew customers were well established and paid better for their goods. This made the net profit ofIn addition, he formed a corporate social responsibility department that was mandatedwith the responsibility of creating activities to encourage interactions between the communityand the company. These went a long way in improving the business image and in discrediting theallegations and rumors that were been spread thus, ensuring that the sales of the business werenot affected. On top of trying to destroy the good business relationship the company had withits customers, Reagan made sure that his department was spotless and that the employees weremotivated and ready to work to enhance the company’s production and reduce costs.Despite Reagan’s hard work to discredit his brother’s efforts, his brother was able toovercome the challenges and emerge victoriously.