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The role of government in food
safety and quality
by Abdulrahman Al Nuaman
WORD COUNT 1162
CHARACTER COUNT 6500
TIME SUBMITTED 08-NOV-2013 07:18PM
PAPER ID 371257608
FINAL GRADE
/100
GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
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Comment 1 GRADE: C+
abdularahman: you make some valid points here and your paper does have some kind of a thesis, but
it’s not stated at the beginning clearly. what are you trying to PROVE?
Comment 2 comma?
Comment 3 this is confusing… what’s your opinion/argument?
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Comment 4 this is a good point, but why is this a separate paragraph?
Comment 5 concluding sentence?
Comment 6 the “doubted cause” doesn’t make sense.
Comment 7 okay… so what? conclude?
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Comment 8 all these paragraphs are very small. what are they trying to PROVE?
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Comment 9 two words.
- The role of government in food safety and quality
by Abdulrahman Al Nuaman
The role of government in food safety and quality
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