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This is two and half pages essay I want it to be 3 pages with enhancement in the essay to be more academic writing. 

 

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Yasser Alotaibi

11/11/2013

Composition 1

Words meaning can be confusing

Verbal languages are the way of people communication and the most advance way that human can use to communicate. Some languages are more difficult to learn than another and some are already gone and not possible for us to learn it anymore and same thing goes with these languages words. Every language has its own beauty in its sound or meaning. We all know some words have more than one meaning and some it just mean what it meant for example: the word “Hot” can describe high temperature or it can refer to someone who’s sexually attractive. In this essay I am going to write about the meaning of some words and the feeling that can be confusing of the same meaning for one word.

Words for emotions can be very confusing because people can build their emotions upon these words and saying words are very easy but meaning what the words mean can maybe hard thing to do so people carefully using them and carefully trying to understand what others really mean by saying these words and not to hurt each other feelings. I found word “love” a great example for the feeling confusion. I have said love when people thought I should have just said word like instead.

I went to camping trip with my friends and their friends and the group was about forty people. We had dinner and we had great time together. We took some great pictures and we uploaded them on the well-known social website Facebook. After I went home I found them on my Facebook feedback so I commented them saying “I had great time and I loved every one there” but one of the guys who was there with us in the trip commented after me saying that I should use words like instead of the word “love”.

For a moment his comment hurts me and made me feel like that guy hated me or that guy was just trying to put me down for some reason but I looked at the comment again and tried to understand what he saw saying. I found that he did not really know me or even talked to me and he has nothing to do with me. He was only trying to correct me or guide me to what he thinks is right. I felt guilty considering him rude person and guilty for blaming myself of not knowing how to express my feelings.

When I look at the word “love” I feel like that word only describes a nice feeling and it can’t be rude or not good to say in anyway in that case. I loved those guys who I went to the camping trip with because they made me feel like they were family or close friends to me whom I cannot use word like describing what I feel about them and I said it trying to express nice feelings inside me toward them in the closest word I feel matches the meaning. I know word “love” can contain a sexual meaning but I love my friends and I love my family and there are no sexual feelings in these cases.

Word “like” to me can be more sexual and that because I know when a person sees another attractive person they like each other at first and then they become lovers or just stay at like level with sexual stuff between them but can’t start with love at the very first moment when they see each other. When I first learned the world “love” I already love my mother, father and my siblings. Word “like” to me can’t be anywhere near the meaning of love describing how much I love my parents or my close friends.

In conclusion when you say something be aware words are confusing sometimes and their meaning can become in a different level of how strong you want your words to be. I believe that words also have a slight different meaning from person to another depending on their experience with these same words and their way of using and hearing the same words so I think we should be more flexible in understanding each other way of using words and try to understand what others really trying to say and not just keep the meaning of what we think that word only mean.

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