Edit Essay

  I have an essay to edit I attached the PDF file with some corrections, and the word file that you can edit on it   I have to add a personal example in the last paragraph before the conclusion about the topic which is a stereotype  1 can you correct the mistskes in the body to make the meaning of ideas more clear that is included transition words and change some sentences structures 2 can you wirte a personal example about sterotype if you can make it up about the stereotype of arabs because I want to be related to my essay.(It should be in the last paragraph before the conclusion )