Chem HW week 6

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OK – I’m glad you sent this in to me and I got to read it.   You have a well-written paper here, but it needs some editing to get it into the proper format.  Here are my suggestions, in no particular order.

 

1.  You need to have a labelled Introduction, Discussion and Conclusions Section.

2.  Your first paragraph is great as the beginning of the Discussion.  Now I want you to write an Introduction.  Briefly introduce the topic.  Give me a couple of statistics, for example.  Then go on to state what the focus of the paper will be (for ex.  This paper will give an overview of the process by which nuclear energy is generated and then discuss some the risks and benefits of this type of energy.)

3.  There are  couple of grammar mistakes (missing prepositions is what I noticed). Pretty good though.

4.  The last paragraph can work as the conclusion.   I want you to start it out, however, with a couple of sentences of summary (This paper has shown…)

5.  Lastly, you need to have and use 4 sources!  You lose big points for not having at least four.

 

Since this is getting to you so late, you can have an extra day to turn it in.  I am hoping to grade them all over the weekend, though, so please, please turn it in by close of business Saturday.