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English Revised Assignment Answers

1. The main reason for staging a two-for-one sale is that we need more space to stock our new inventory.

2. We are kindly requesting you to complete the enclosed card in order for us to update our customer records and eliminate the expense of duplicate mailings.

3. If only you had carefully listened to our agent, you would have known that your policy does not cover accidents that occur outside the United States.

4. The salary that we are offering is commensurate with the other managers’ remuneration.

5. Pursuant to your invitation, we shall interrogate our agent.

6. It would not be advisable for you to affix your signature now.

7. Our Accounting Department would like to take this opportunity to inform you that we gave credited your account for the aforementioned sum.

8. There are four new menu items, which we must promote.

9. It is perfectly clear that meetings held on a monthly basis are the most effective.

10. Every employee may change and alter their schedule in order to accommodate customer business.

11. As for the area that deals with athletic shoes, the degree of profits sagged.

12. This is to inform you that we have a service line, which is toll-free.

13. We must conduct an investigation of all parking violations before we can consider your fine.

14. Pursuant to your request enclosed, please find your job application.

15. Your goal should be to write business messages that are concise, clear, and written with courtesy.