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Your evidence is well put here, but you need to explain its significance and tie it all into your larger point. Remember, just saying that poverty negatively effects education is not enough. You need to make a point about American culture (that all these policies ensure that the poor will only get poorer as the rich get richer). Obviously poverty will effect the quality of education; so what? Why is it bad? Some americans will seriously argue that the poor deserve to stay that way; arguing against that view may give you your greater meaning.
Omar Fallatah
English 101
Mr. Andrew Vanden Bossche
Poverty has negatively affected the Education in America
There are almost 2,7 million
The most people who have effected by poverty are low income.
They extremely have a hard time to build their future. According to the New York Times, “Another 2.6 million people slipped into poverty in the United States last year. According to the Census Bureau reported , and the number of Americans living below the official poverty line, 46.2 million people, was the highest number in the 52 years the bureau has been publishing figures on it. And in new signs of distress among the middle class, median household incomes fell last year to levels last seen in 1996.Lower income families who have a large number of children will accord this problem .The households can’t cover the home needing. They have not the all ability to cover the family needing. There are many issues that really impact these people. There is so much stuff for lower income to cover in united state. They must to buy car insurance, health insurance, school tuition and others households needing.”
By the year 2020, the majority of students in America’s public schools will be living in circumstances that will categorize them as at risk of educational failure. A person’s education is closely linked to the individual’s life chances, income, and well being”
(Battle and Lewis 2002). Moreover, in the last ten years, there was growing a huge gap between the top income class and the less income class
There are three issues which are the most effected the education in America. They are food supply,
The lower income people can’t provide enough food for themselves. The households are having a hard time to provide en enough food for their children. Drop-off in the reach of U.S. summer nutrition programs in 2010 and ongoing budget-cutting at state and local levels suggest that many schoolchildren in the United States will face another summer of hunger this year. According to a new report from the Food Research and Action Center, despite record numbers of children receiving free and reduced-price meals during the 2009-10 school years, participation in federal summer nutrition programs fell nationally in 2010. FRAC reports that in July 2010 only 15 children received nutrition aid for every 100 low-income students who received lunch during the 2009-10 school years.
The food supply is really affected the kids to be success in their school. The way to solve this issue is must provide enough food that could be useful to a void . ” One in eight Americans — 37 million — received emergency food help last year, up 46% from 2005, the nation’s largest hunger-relief group reports today. Children are hit particularly hard, according to the report by Feeding America, a network of 203 food banks nationwide. One in five children, 14 million, received food from soup kitchens, food pantries and other agencies, up from 9 million in 2005, the year of the group’s last major survey”( Wend Koch). Hopefully, the food banks can be useful to decrease the food supply. Food banks would cover a big part of the food supply. In this case, the children won’t affected by food supply. They will be successes in their schoo
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Second of all, there is a huge gap in performance between rich and the poor students in America. “In 2008, the graduation rate African-Americans was 61.5% compared to 81% for whites. There is report says that almost 60000 schools in America truly need to reform and repairs”.
““We have moved from a society in the 1950s and 1960s, in which race was more consequential than family income, to one today in which family income appears more determinative of educational success than race,” said Sean F. Reardon, a Stanford University sociologist. Professor Reardon is the author of a study that found that the gap in standardized test scores between affluent and low-income students had grown by about 40 percent since the 1960s, and is now double the testing gap between blacks and whites. In another study, by researchers from the University of Michigan, the imbalance between rich and poor children in college completion — the single most important predictor of success in the work force — has grown by about 50 percent since the late 1980s”( SABRINA TAVERNISE). Unfortunately, this gap is still growing and making a big different social level. The main reason of growing this gap is rich student families whom invest their money and time in recreation spicily in the weekends. The most effected in this point are single parent. According to the New York Times article
Education Gap Grows between Rich and Poor, Studies , “One reason for the growing gap in achievement, researchers say, could be that wealthy parents invest more time and money than ever before in their children (in weekend sports, ballet, music lessons, math tutors, and in overall involvement in their children’s schools), while lower-income families, which are now more likely than ever to be headed by a single parent, are increasingly stretched for time and resources. This has been particularly true as more parents try to position their children for college, which has become ever more essential for success in today’s economy” (SABRINA TAVERNISE) Furthermore, there could be a solution for this issue, policy makers and educators must look to this point seriously. Because, this case could helps to prepares jobs and the poor children can support their parents. Hopefully, this huge gap will narrow down that surely will help the poor children get a better condition education.
Third of all, home environment is biggest issue that has affected the education in America. Students must to live in an ideal home environment that will help them to be success. ” reported that family environment, including socioeconomic status, played a key role in students’ academic achievement and performance. The intent of the study was to present a profile on selected urban youth in inner-city communities in the West Jackson Area to determine how selected risk indicators impacted academic achievement”(Brown-Ford, Carrie). Families must to provide a safe and quit please for their kids. Students should be out of disturbance that will help them to get more attention and focus. This issue is always harm the poor neighborhoods. This issue has affected the education in the poor neighborhoods. It’s really households issue and government education system. They must to provide a solution to avoid this negatively affect. Moreover, here in America, there are several home environment. Such as California area is way different than Washington area. The kids who raise there would be different than the kid who raise in Washington area.
The external factors is the very vertex part of affecting the education. In the whole world, the poor neighborhoods are always risk areas.” The researcher predicted that students exposed to negative socialization patterns in their homes and communities would have a strong possibility of developing and exhibiting those same behaviors through varied means of negative expression. These behaviors were categorized as alcohol and drug use, poor academic performance, gang activity and delinquency”( Brown-Ford, Carrie). Furthermore, the poor neighborhood must be protected of external factors. Because, that case really affected the education negatively. Hopefully, the poor neighborhoods would be equal to the rich neighborhoods in the education level.
In sum, poverty has negatively affected the education in America. . In the meanwhile, poverty is becoming a serious issue that is effecting the education in America. There are three issues which are the most effected the education in America. They are food supply, huge gap between poor and rich in education and home environment. There fund out that a proved there is a huge gap in education between rich and the poor students. Hopefully this issue avoid and solved in the future. Moreover, , home environment is biggest issue that has affected the education in America. Students must to live in an ideal home environment that will help them to be success. The most important point of solving this issue is policy makers and educators must look to this point seriously. Because, this case could helps to prepares jobs and the poor children can support their parents.
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This seems to contradict the quote from the New York Times.
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poverty is virtually the same as low income; expl
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This quote is too long; break it up and comment on it line by line, or cut some of the information that isn’t as vital to your argument.
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You have to open and close your quotes. It’s unclear what the quote is here.
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Cite specific statistics that show exactly what this gap is, and what counts as higher income or lower income.
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You have to prove and show how adequete food supplies will help the students be successful.
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You’ve already stated this statement in your intro sentence. You should be giving reasons for HOW the gap is affecting education. You’re also talking mosly about race in this paragraph which is a good idea, but it’s not exactly the same as income levels.
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Remove italics
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What specifically are the differences? You should probably just cut this.
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Final Grade 2.0
Your evidence is well put here, but you need to explain its significance and tie it all into your larger point. Remember, just saying that poverty negatively effects education is not enough. You need to make a point about American culture (that all these policies ensure that the poor will only get poorer as the rich get richer). Obviously poverty will effect the quality of education; so what? Why is it bad? Some americans will seriously argue that the poor deserve to stay that way; arguing against that view may give you your greater meaning.
